Proof Finally Here!

So, the point of a proof is to do a dry run and see how things look and frankly I am so glad I did!
Here is what I found:​FRONT COVER:  
CONS: 
- photo is too dull and underexposed.
- bottom is not cropped properly.
- I realized many people may not know what a "bush" adventure means...and it may bring up uncomfortable things when searched! That needs to change!
PROS: The feel of the matte finish with the leather look is really nice. Makes you almost thing it is leather.
- spine isn't perfect however is even and consistent enough. Not bad..
- over all design and colouring is good. I like it.
BACK COVER
CONS:
- text is simple a little too big! I wanted big, however once you see it, you realize it doesn't have to be THAT big!
- the bear and cubs looks a little too squarish and stretched. Actually, the whole thing looks a little stretched.
- need to take the price off the ISBN simply because the price is going to need to change.
PROS:
- the layout is simple and easy to read.
- the embossed bear and cubs looks cool and appears embossed!

CONTENT WITH TEXT AND INK DRAWINGS ONLY
DEDICATION PAGE:
CONS:
- it is not in the correct place which throws off all the layouts! In the PDF it read fine, but NOT in the book! Live and Learn. I will be calling to find out why this happened although the first proof I did with CreateSpace also had this issue.
PROS:
- spacing and lettering is fine.
- layout is fine
- the pen and ink drawing is clear and not very faded...it is likely because of the inferior quality paper!
COPYRIGHT PAGE:
CONS:
- there are ink marks running up and down in columns like something was transferred on it.
PROS:
- all type is clear and easy to read, however Disclaimer could have a slightly smaller font.
- layout and spacing is fine.
MAIN TITLE PAGE:
CONS;
- It is on the front side so hard to see gutter however it appears lettering will need more space from edge!
- colour bleeding sucks due to the paper quality.
- "of the" could have more space or a different colouring, not enough contrast but could be paper.
- can take a period out of R.B. Morgan to RB. Morgan
PROS:
- all lettering is clear, well spaced and easy to read.
PAGE ONE & TWO:
Cons:
- lettering in both boxes could go down one to fit the box 
- will need to leave more gutter space.
- box slightly too small in page one.
- some sort of line is running through one of the images on page one.
PROS:
- both boxes have nice spacing with bottom of page.
PAGE THREE AND FOUR:
CONS:
- top on both pages looks fine.
- pump house in crooked in page four.
- images could be slightly sharper...perhaps a higher resolution?
PROS:
- print on both pages is nicely spaced, consistent and easy to read.
PAGE FIVE AND SIX:
CONS:
- colouring is totally screwed! Far too dark and faded. The paper does not hold dark colour resolution at all well. entire thing is off! Odd and faded! 
- another bleed line on page six!
PROS:
- lettering fits boxes well. I think gutter will be needed and it will be fine!
PAGES SEVEN AND EIGHT:
CONS:
- once again images are dull! Likely due to the paper.
- cat needs more texture - looks too much like a cut-out!
PROS:
- textures and colours are fine even if too dark and dull.
PAGE NINE AND TEN:
CONS:
- printing in boxes need work!
- again dull
- a little too much texture in one of the mushrooms.
- work on branches of fallen trees..shadows or limbs?
PROS:
- it is all there.
PAGE ELEVEN AND TWELVE:
CONS:
- spacing in box definitely off!
- once again, too DULL!!!
PROS:
- Colouring and images ok
PAGE THIRTEEN AND FOURTEEN:
CONS:
- lettering in both boxes too close to top of box
- any way to cut away the tree  or have it go OVER the box on that side?
PROS:
- Images work
PAGE FIFTEEN AND SIXTEEN:
CONS:
- besides dullness, nothing much.
PROS:
- images all work and spacing in boxes are the best so far.
PAGE SEVENTEEN AND EIGHTEEN:
CONS:
- too dull
PROS:
- like it
PAGE NINETEEN AND TWENTY:
CONS:
- same as above
PROS:
- like it
PAGE TWENTY ONE AND TWENTY TWO:
CONS:
- same as above
- PROS:
- lettering all works and lines up
PAGE TWENTY THREE AND TWENTY FOUR:
CONS:
- text is box on 23 slightly high
PROS:
- other works - will need gutter!
PAGE TWENTY FIVE AND TWENTY SIX:
CONS:
- all works however eye of golden hawk slightly off!
- box runs off page!
- too much cropping with family
- too much blank space on page 26
PROS:
- colours work!
- images work
PAGE TWENTY SEVEN AND TWENTY EIGHT:
CONS:
- something lightly off of shape of boy's hat on his head.
PROS:
- all the rest is fine but blank space
PAGE TWENTY NINE AND THIRTY:
CONS:
- all too dull
PROS:
- face is sweet!
PAGE THRITY ONE AND THIRTY TWO:
CONS:
- eyeball off on boy 
- looks too much older than other boy
- another ink line!
PROS:
- Layout is fine
​- colours are fine but too dull
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